REWRITE ANALYSIS SERVICE

You've finished that second draft of your screenplay, and in your opinion, it's pretty darn good. After all, why would you have written it any other way? Yet there are those nagging doubts. Is it really ready for the marketplace? Will my script be one of the very few that get past a first read? If I run it up the flagpole will anyone salute?

Many writers turn to a pro reader for rewrite help, but conventional coverage is mostly about grading a screenplay and offering criticisms. My Rewrite Analysis Service, on the other hand, is entirely about providing fresh insights guaranteed to greatly assist the writer in their effort to fully realize their screen story's full potential. My unique background as an educator and a screenwriter allow me to offer not only clear and concise notes, but detailed explanations of applicable underlying principles as well.

0) First Impressions

1) Story Structure

2) Characterization

3) Dialog

4) Theme

5) Audience/Reader Suspension of Disbelief

6) Format and Presentation

7) Style

8) Additional Suggestions and Recommendations

The fee for my rewrite analysis service, for screenplays up to 135 pages in length, is $285.00. Turnaround time is 3 to 5 working days. Payment can be made with a credit card by clicking on the credit card logos below.

I will acknowledge receipt of your payment and provide further instructions via return email.

Questions?

Email: screenplayrewrite@earthlink.net